Aspiring writer who submits an Elizabethan sonnet for a chance at Château de Noya.
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DRAFT — minimal character stub drawn from the How They Fall manuscript. To expand.
William Miller
Established facts (from How They Fall)
Brother of Aurora Miller.
Son of Lori and Adam (surname inconsistent in the draft — "Morris" in one line, "Miller" elsewhere; reconcile).
Warwickshire, England, 1875.
Humble origin; family was debt-free, owned a home, grew their own food, and sacrificed aggressively to savings for their children's future.
Saved his own money for three years in pursuit of a newly released typewriter.
Encountered the Old Man at the town gate, who was distributing entry sheets for a Château de Noya Sonnet Laureate Submission — prize: a new typewriter; grand prize: an invitation to Château de Noya.
Only William could see the Old Man; Aurora could not.
Outline threads involving William (from author's notes)
Receives the typewriter.
Accepts invitation to Château de Noya.
Meets Sachi — a gifted kid; studies alongside him.
Present when Lori is diagnosed.
The Sonnet Sheet (from the manuscript)
Form: Elizabethan sonnet.
Rhyme scheme: ABAB CDCD EFEF GG.
Meter: iambic pentameter.
Structure: three quatrains and a couplet.
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Yotam, Kris · Jun 2025
Yotam, Kris. (Jun 2025). William Miller. krisyotam.com. https://krisyotam.com/ocs/how-they-fall/william-miller